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The Last Caper!



An original comedy for film by JERRY HAMMER




Possible cast:


Staring


Kevin Kline


Sandra Bullock


Morgan Freeman


Ernest Borgnine


Jerry Stiller




This material is registered with the

Writer’s Guild East


Contact: JERRY HAMMER

HAMMER PRODUCTIONS

47 Lafayette Place

Greenwich, CT 06830

Tel 310.922.8432


Copyright 2012


OPENING on a New York street scene (Credits begin to roll). An older man, Mortimer, walking five dogs of different sizes and ages. He turns a corner onto Park Avenue (as the credit’s continue to roll and the sound of music is heard). He stops in front a large apartment house, hands the leash of one of the dogs to the doorman who is standing out front.


DOORMAN (Nods)

Thanks, Mortimer


Mortimer without responding continues on, walking down the street. Several buildings away, Mortimer stops with another doorman in front and hands him a leash with one of the dogs (Mortimer remains now with three dogs).


DOORMAN

Did he do his business, Mortimer?


MORTIMER

He always does. He’s a good Pisher!

(He bends and pets the dog)


He then continues on and turns the corner on 78th Street heading toward 5th Avenue. He comes to a townhouse and rings the bell. After a minute, the housekeeper opens the door on the street level. The remaining three dogs jump on her.


HOUSEKEEPER

(Speaks to a dog)

Hello Bo-Bo, did you be a good dog with Mortimer today?

If you did, I am going to give you a treat.


MORTIMER

No treat for Bo-Bo! She barked too much today.

She was a bad dog (As he begins to walk away out of frame).

You can give Mollie a treat!


C.U.

HOUSEKEEPR

(Continues to talk to the dogs)

Come in, Bo-Bo and Mollie! I’ll give you a treat no

matter what that man says about you.


CUT TO:


Mortimer walking away shaking his head.




CONT:

MORTIMER

(Speaking out loud to himself)

Bo-Bo will get a treat whether she does

the right thing or not. In the old days

growing up you had to be good to get

something special. They spoil everybody

and everything today.


Mortimer continues to mumble to himself as he heads toward Fifth Avenue.


MORTIMER

What a world! Technology is changing

everything!


Mortimer gets to another house on the corner of Fifth Avenue. The doorman is standing outside.



DOORMAN

What do you say Mortimer? The dog take you

for a nice walk today?


MORTIMER

(Shakes his head)

You think it’s funny, but when you grow older

you need the exercise.


DOORMAN

That’s what I said! The dog took you for a walk,

he’s keeping you healthy.


MORTIMER

(Stares at Doorman for a few seconds)

And what keeps you healthy? Oatmeal, right?

Vitamin pills! cholesterol pills! I don’t need any

of those, I just keep walking.


DOORMAN

That’s not so. You sit for hours and play cards in

the park with your friends.


MORTIMER

Well at least I have friends.



CONT:

DOORMAN

(Smiles)

Yes, I know Mortimer and they’re all dogs.

(He laughs out loud as he takes the leash from Mortimer).


CUT TO C.U.:


Stop Light


CUT TO:


Mortimer crossing Fifth Avenue to the entrance of the park on 79th Street. As he’s walking in the park he comes upon an older lady.

OLD LADY

(Sitting on a bench feeding squirrels. Looks up seeing Mortimer)

Hello, Mortimer!


MORTIMER (Smiles)

Hello, Mrs. Silverman! How are you?


OLD LADY

I’m fine, thanks to Medicare. I went to

my doctor and it didn’t cost me a cent.


MORTIMER

(Stops in front of her)

What did you go to the doctor for?


OLD LADY

I’m not going to tell you. It’s none

of your business. If we were together

as a couple I would tell you.


MORTIMER

Mrs. Silverman, you know that’s

never going to happen.


OLD LADY

Your loss! You could be having home

cooked meals every night. Pot roast, all

your favorite things.




CONT:

MORTIMER

I’ll settle for what we have now, once

a week is enough. You got to stop trying

to seduce me you naughty lady!


OLD LADY

Your loss! My offer may not go on forever

you know. You got to deliver!


MORTIMER

You talk like we’re young people. Deliver what?

Your newspaper?


OLD LADY

(Changing the subject)

I hardly recognize you without your dogs.


MORTIMER

Don’t make fun of my dogs, they pay my rent.

That’s better than any woman ever did for me!


OLD LADY

Go! Don’t be a FASCIST go to your card

game! You don’t want to be late. Your cronies

will give you a hard time.


Mortimer waving her off walks on.


CUT TO:


A concrete table with concrete benches. Fred, an elegant black elderly man with gray hair is sitting at the table with a deck of cards playing solitaire. He is singing softly to himself as he lays the cards down on the table. He is signing “Home on the Range.” Manny, a heavy set elderly man walks up to where he is sitting.


MANNY

Fred, is that the only song you ever learned?


FRED

(Lays his cards down and looks up)

If it was good enough for Will Rogers and

Roy Rogers, it’s good enough for me. Hello

Manny!



CONT:


MANNY

How come Mortimer is always the last

one to get here?


FRED

Well, he has his job. He’s walking his

dogs.


MANNY

Some job. He takes animals to pee.


FRED

Don’t knock it! I have my own problems

peeing.


MANNY

Well, maybe Mortimer should take you for

walk.


FRED

(Smiles and looks up at Manny)

Your in good form today I see. Did you take

smart pills along with your bran for breakfast?


MANNY

Never better and I’m gonna woop your ass

in cards today!

FRED

(Looking up at Mortimer who is arriving)

Here comes Mortimer and he’s dogless!


MANNY

(Turns his head and looks at Mortimer arriving and then looks back at Fred)

Maybe he’ll take you for a walk so you

could pee.

FRED

You’re always funny. You always have

something to say about everything.


CUT TO THREE SHOT: Mortimer arrives.




CONT:


They each shake hands as if they’ve been away for weeks and then take their seats as if they are going to begin a professional match of some kind.


CUT TO:


Mortimer as he takes a pad and pencil out of his jacket pocket.


MORTIMER

Fred, you owe me two-thousand-one hundred

ec’s and Manny you owe me eighteen hundred

ec’s after the last game.


FRED

Mortimer, why does it have to be euros? Why

can’t it just be dollars since we aren’t paying

each other anyways.


MANNY

Mortimer wants to get used to euros in case

he takes that trip to England, which he has

been planning since his Bar Mitzvah.


FRED
It’s so damn confusing. I never know how

much I lost or won.


MORTIMER

What does it matter? We don’t pay each other

anyway.


FRED

So why can’t we play in dollars?


MANNY

(To Fred)

By the way, on the way here I passed

the Chase bank and two armed guards were

loading money onto their truck. I asked them if

they had a free sample. When they laughed I asked

if they knew you Fred. I said, “Do you know Fred

Johnson?” He was one of you guys for over twenty

years and is now retired. But you know these young

guys, they just shrugged and said they didn’t know you.


CONT:

MORTIMER

I don’t want to hear about Fred and his 38-alliber pistol

and how good he looked in his guard uniform. And I don’t

want to hear anymore of his Korean War stories. Just deal the

cards. I’m feeling hot.

MANNY

Did you guys see CSI last night?


FRED

(as he is dealing cards to Manny).

I watched it and I solved the crimes long

before they did!


MANNY

You always do, Fred! I watched it too.

It never made sense to me, they leave all

that evidence around.


MORTIMER

They have to do that in order to solve the

crime within the hour.


FRED

I think today we should start working on

another crime of our own. One that’s better

than CSI.


MORTIMER

Every crime we work on is better than CSI

and we don’t have to leave special clues to

help solve it.


MANNY

I have an idea. If we’re so good, maybe we

should pull off a real caper. We don’t have

that much to loose. If we get caught, our life

expectancy is not that much. It’s like they

sentenced Bernie Madoff to one-hundred and

fifty years, he might not live ten years more.


FRED

While your talking about a Caper, I have one

word to say.

CONT:


MANNY

And what’s that?


FRED

Gin!

MORTIMER

He got you, Manny! You better pay attention

to the game.


FRED

(Pointing to a nearby bench)

Isn’t that your son-in-law, Marco over there?


Manny Turns.


CUT TO:


Younger man sitting on the bench nearby.


CUT TO:


MANNY

I wonder if the jerk is following me. Maybe

he wonders where I go each day.


CUT TO:


C.U. of the younger man (Marco) on the bench opening a newspaper and he has a package resting on his lap. He is nervously looking around, but not at the three men playing cards near by. A lady pushing a carriage stops at the bench and sits down near the man.



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